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HOW TO WRITE AN OFFICIAL LETTER THROUGH SOMEONE

How to Write Formal/Official Letter

Formal letters, also known as official letters, refer to any message to a person in their official capacity, and are thus served formally regardless of the sender and recipient's relationship.There are various types of formal letters, including:
 a) letters of apology,
 b) letters of request,
 c) letters of inquiry,
 d) letters of application, 
 e) letters of complaint.
 f) A letter to the editor or publisher.

A cartoon illustration of a postman rushing against time to deliver letters


Features of Official Letters

The following are common characteristics of official letters:

  •  they should be brief and direct;
  •  the tone should be formal and polite; 
  •  they should be presented in intelligible grammatically correct words.

Official letters do not use contracted forms of phrases like don't, I'm, and so on.

Formal Letters Format

All formal letters should include the following elements:

1. The Address of the Sender

The address of the individual writing the letter is also known as the return address.
In most cases, it is represented on the top right-hand side of the writing notepad, although it can also be listed on the left-hand side when a full block format has been adopted, as is popular currently. The following information should be included in the return address:
a) The postcode and box number.
b) The actual location, i.e. the name of the town in which the post office is located.
It is important to remember that the sender's name is not part of the address, but the name of the institution from which they are writing can be used if applicable.

As An Example

Daraja Mbili High School
P.O. Box 3050-1030
Kagio

2. The Date

The date the letter was written is critical for reference purposes. Because it is not part of the sender's address, one should skip a line before writing it. It is also critical to follow the right format, which includes writing the month's name in full.

An illustration 

May 13, 2025.

13th July,2024

3. The Address of the Recipient

It refers to the address of the person receiving the letter, as the name implies. It is also known as an inside address. The inside address is written on the left-hand side of the writing material, a line below the date.
Even if you know or are related to the person you are writing to, only state their title or position in that organization,

That is,

The Human Resource Manager,
The Manager, 
The Chief Executive Officer, 
The Secretary, The Director, 
The Principal, and so on.
Similarly, other details such as the name of the institution, the postal address, the postal code, and the name of the town, also known as the physical address, can be written.

As an example,

The Principal,
St. Kizito Secondary School, 
P.O. Box 132-4563
Busia.

Keep in mind that if you're sending a letter through someone else, the address of the person through whom the letter is being sent should come after the recipient's address, after skipping a line.

For Example

Through
The Head of Department Languages
Kineni High School
P.O. Box 70-50204
Borabu

It's important to note that we usually write letters through someone else when the person the letter is going through works at the same place as the person the letter is meant for, and we usually write through the supervisors, managers, or bosses of the person the letter is meant for, mostly out of courtesy. Also, it's important to remember that even if we know who we're writing through, we shouldn't put their name in this address. Since this is an official letter, we should just use their position.

4. Salutation

It is the greetings written after skipping a line beneath the recipient's address. It can be communicated as Dear Sir, Dear Madam,  when the recipient's gender  is known but their name not known or Dear Sir/Madam when the recipient's gender and name is unknown.Overall, when the addressee is known, the salutation is Dear Mr/Mrs./Rev/Ms ...then comes merely a surname/family name.

To demonstrate,

Dear Mrs. Kitili
Dear Mr. Njogu
It is worth noting that while writing to a lady and you not sure whether she is married or not, you can use "Ms.", which is a title for both married and unmarried women.

As in, 

Dear Ms. Nyaboke.



5. Subject

The subject refers to a summary of the letter's content. It is frequently preceded by 'RE:' which stands for 'concerning.'When handwritten, it should always be written in capital letters and highlighted.

For Instance

RE: APOLOGY FOR DISRUPTING THE CLASS DURING PRIVATE STUDY TIME

6. The Body

It should contain the letter's core message. The subject will be determined by the purpose of the letter, such as an application, an apology, or an inquiry, to name a few instances. The body of formal letters should have at least three brief paragraphs.
The first paragraph is usually the introduction, which explains why the letter is being written. For example, I am writing to apply for a job, a scholarship, to apologize, to complain, or to make a request.
The second paragraph of this letter should include pertinent information about the letter's purpose. Additional information about why the letter was written is provided here.
The third paragraph in the body states what actions you want the receivers to do based on the letter's aims. For example, if it is a letter of complaint, one can insist on being reimbursed for possibly substandard services or commodities obtained.
Remember that the writing in official letters should always be formal and unambiguous, and that the three paragraphs should be competently and rationally organized.

7. Closing Remarks

It is normally written a line below the final paragraph. It gathers the following:
  • A complimentary comment. For example, 'Yours faithfully' if the recipient is unknown, or 'Yours sincerely' if the recipient is known.
  • The salutation establishes the accompanying remark, for example, Dear Sir/Madam signifies the recipient is unknown, so 'Yours faithfully' is used. When the recipients are recognized or known, such as Dear Mr Kimani, we use 'Yours sincerely.'
  •  Signature. Because all formal letters must be signed, the signature should follow the complimenting remark. Then comes, the writer's name ; here, the official name should be shown in full; and lastly, the position held in the office.
It is important to note that we say 'Yours' rather than 'Your's' because the latter suggests 'Your is,' which is not the intended connotation.

For example,

Yours sincerely
Signature 
Mocha Fabian
Chief Executive Office
 




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